Carilynn Pine

United States

Message to Readers

Any feedback is fine. I know it isn't great. It was a quick write.


December 2, 2020

PROMPT: All Talk

You didn't have to go that far.
I didn't have a choice!
Yes you did. You always have a choice.
No. Not always. Not in this case.
They won't soon forget it.
If I hadn't made that decision, who knows where we would be.
We wouldn't be here!
Why are you making this so hard on me? I'm trying, I'm really trying.
You had the opportunity in your hands and you purposely threw it away.
I thought I made the right choice.
Well you didn't.
Please I'm trying! I thought it was right.
I've had enough of this. 

No wait!                                                                            please.


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  • crystalline•galaxies

    woah, i love the characterization in this. the characters have clear motives and personalities, even though the reader barely gets any information about them.

    5 months ago
  • mirkat

    ahhh this is so sweet but also sorrowful and i feel like this is whole... like i don't need more. somehow? idk...
    oh and welcome to wtw!

    5 months ago