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If I entered my mind #decemberprompts3 #Day 3

December 3, 2020


I entered into my mind,
it was messy, clumsy, lazy,
confused, overwhelmed, little happy,
like a sponge dipped in pain, my foot got stuck
to the unnecessary thoughts glued. And,
pain squeezed out of the sponge,
there were some spider’s web on the corner of the room, but
I found a way out, oops
I scattered the false bitter comments kept in a box, wow
I stumbled upon the walls of her brain, it had bright comments engraved with decorated dreams she built, ouch
I got hurt by the bumpy road which leads to an abandoned room, ahh
people call it the room of creativity, wow
there was a lot there, why
doesn’t she use it so often?
maybe it needs the courage to open this room for the world, she needs the courage to suck,
so I grabbed this piece from the creativity room and ran away,
I tried to escape her brain, but
I was caught, now
her mind is a prison and I can’t get out.
‘her mind is a prison and I can’t get out’ inspired by Alec Benjamin’s song ‘my mind is a prison’ well I just wanted to end it with this line. Hehe!
So I am having some courage to suck….I got out of my mind with this piece. ENJOY!

Prompt 3- Write about your journey if you were in your mind!!!


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  • crystalline•galaxies

    i love all the alec benjamin references you sprinkle into your pieces! it makes me so happy when i spot them.

    5 months ago
  • ~madeline~

    I love this soooo much!! It's so fascinating... actually wrote me own :)
    here's a link if you are interested.

    5 months ago
  • Jasmine khawar

    Ohhh i loved it!

    5 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    re: pfff not true!! yours is beautiful :) glad you liked it, though!! <3

    5 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    i wrote one! :)

    5 months ago
  • mirkat

    ahhh so powerful and amazing and the italicized and bold words really add a lot.... might try it out.... <3<3<3

    5 months ago
  • Sanjana Sunilkumar

    Love the italicized ones!

    5 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    re: oh haha well why are you up so late???!!?? it's 4:00 in the afternoon, dec. 2, here, so i guess it makes sense why it's slightly off lol. well, i'll work on writing this tomorrow (for me haha) and you can get some sleep :) <3

    5 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    ooh i can't wait to use this prompt! your poem is beautiful :D one question, are you doing one prompt a day or multiple in the day? either way, i love them :) <333

    5 months ago