Below, you'll see any text that was highlighted with comments from the reviewer.
I really love the descriptive adjectives, I could almost feel like I was there myself. It was also quite personal and I admire being able to read something like this.
The part that I highlighted was the most intruiging for me. I'd love it to be more described, because I think that the "omen of death" was a very specific and fascinating aproach.
I honestly do feel satisfied with the ending. Everything was perfectly balanced and I didn't feel as I needed something more.
I just loved the piece. I'd love to read more of it!