Eremurus- a flower native to eastern Europe and temperate Asia; aka foxtail lily or desert candle; often compared to a long spike
the flower is unlike any other and the word infatuates the tongue (or at least mine)
This is a scene from a book I'm working on, I plan on publishing them as I finish them (except the ones that would give away too much about the story) for feedback.
1. I want to make sure I'm giving descriptive enough information but not so much that I take away the space for the reader's imagination.
2. There is a sort of voice to it but so far it's less of Adam's voice and more of my voice so I know I'll need to work on that much.
3. I'm not sure how I feel about my skill level with dialogue so I'd like to know whether it feels natural.
This is the first rough draft with minimal editing from myself. Also, Adam is not the name of the story, I'm keeping track of which scene is from which perspective.
Written By: Eremurus
December 1, 2020