Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

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-Go say hi to my incredible friends V-Rose and mindfruit. They’re two of the most amazing people I’ve ever met. I don’t know what I’d do without them.

“A pen doesn't stop you from doodling when the words stop for a second
And you need to draw them first.”
-V-Rose

"If you bury mindfruit's feet and water him weekly, he'll grow just like a tree.” - mindfruit

“and as long as we fight we'll continue to see another day
and we'll drift off to sleep in the ruins of yesterday”
-mindfruit

~ I want to be your friend. No one has to be alone ~

What Happens Next?

November 29, 2020

FREE WRITING

10
The first words you spoke to me 
Got trapped in my mind
Waiting
For more beautiful strings of letters
To combine and grow into
A flame 
Every word since 
Has burrowed a place into my heart
I tried to ignore it
Dispute it
Forget it
But I can’t do that anymore 
When I first took a good long
Look at my surroundings
I was much like a
Tiny bird
Frozen
Unsure
And unstable
But you flashed a smile 
So incredibly sincere
It knocked me back a step
And when you spoke
Your voice, as soft and
Lovely as silver and pearls
Made my heart dance
With another smile that sent a
Pang of emotions through me
You turned and gestured for me
To follow you
I did, my feet unwilling to
Stay put
You led me silently into the wide 
Forest
Into a small, fragrant clearing that filled
Me with joy
Then on past the lush plants
I walked a few paces behind you
Wondering I’d I was dreaming when 
I heard you whisper
My name 
Finally, I looked out over a wide ravine
The floor was covered with glittering Diamonds
Gorgeous and precious, yes
But treacherously jagged
Then there you were, on the other side
Calling me
Willing me to come to you
You crossed the valley of sharp stones
And to this day, I’m not exactly sure how
You managed to pull me after you
I couldn’t bear to see you 
Disappear into the mist you backed into
Out of sight
But I could still hear you
Calling
I had to follow
So I leapt
When I reached the other side
You came forward and wrapped me in an 
Unexpected embrace
Your golden tear trickled down
Onto my hand
Yet your hands were strong as you
Touched my face
I closed my eyes
Frozen in the moment 
And when I opened them
You were gone
I searched for you
And traced the outline of your footprints
I know you were there
You are there
But do you know how much I want 
To talk to you again?
For you to say my name
Yes, that’s what I want
I know you are still there
I just have to sort out these feelings 
And I know if I call you 
You will come
If I’m hurting
You will come
You are not gone
But I have to decide now
How I feel
You grip my hand
And smile again
How could I ever stop these feelings?
I cannot 
And the question rings in my mind
What happens next?
Some more poetry.... have a great night!

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17 Comments
  • Jason_claire :)

    replyin-Totally, and thank you!


    6 months ago
  • Jason_claire :)

    I love the mystery to this, and the description of the setting is so amazing. This strange being is one I long to welcome into he world.
    replyin- Aw, thank you, its nice to know that someone cares about me. Thank you again :)


    6 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: ^U^ <3


    6 months ago
  • doodleninja

    re: XD glad you like my pfp!


    6 months ago
  • ava09 (sorta back)

    replying: hahaha you're soo welcomeee <33333 :) and thank youuu!!


    6 months ago
  • ChimChim_1

    Re: No problem :3


    6 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: It's okay. I'm glad you told me about that song.


    6 months ago
  • FantasyOtter12

    i just saw your comment on mindfruit's piece ITS SNOWING?? luckkyyyy.. we haven't gone anywhere to see snow for the past couple years :\


    6 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: Thanks, Lark. <3 <3 <3
    You're welcome. ^u^
    Wow... that song is beautiful. Her song Battle Cry was one of my anthems when I was in the darkest season of my life. But I can't really listen to that song anymore, because it's one that Red reintroduced to me. I think (hope) it was one of his real moments of vulnerability... He usually listens to (good) rap and pop-rock, so I think that song meant something to him. So it's ironic that you'd show me another song by her because he's probably listened to it and connected to it on whatever level he's capable of. Ugh, that song is amazing, and I think I needed to listen to it, but now I'm confused again. *sigh*


    6 months ago
  • ChimChim_1

    Re: Thank you ill make sure to reach out and good story I really like it :3


    6 months ago
  • storie_bird

    Wow, this is so emotional - I like how you capture the storyline<333

    Re: thanks for the comments:D I feel so pleased!


    6 months ago
  • doodleninja

    re: ahaha nice to meet you Eden! You can just call me Doodleninja, or Doodle for short :)


    6 months ago
  • doodleninja

    your imagery and your metaphors are all so poignant and beautiful. Love the formatting of this too, with the short lil phrases! Wonderful poetry :D


    6 months ago
  • crystalline•galaxies

    re: every single one of your comments is so heartfelt and lovely. are you serious about notifying you when i post? i don't want to flood your comments if it's unwanted.


    6 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    This is random but I can't wait to watch you and your writing grow and mature over the years


    6 months ago
  • ava09 (sorta back)

    yeah i second what ambedo & sugar cookies said. dang girl you're about to make me cry haha this hits differenttttt XD.
    replying: you're welcome fam <333


    6 months ago
  • anemoia by a thread

    late night poetry is golden.


    6 months ago