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PLEASE REVIEW!!! THANKS
I love the way the emotion combines with the story. I also like how you don't say what is happening, but it is implied with words. So you understand what is happening, but it isn't necessarily said.
No! It was honestly amazing the way you described it.
THE ENDING WAS SO GOOD!
Your story is really good. I love how you combine emotions and the events that happened in your life.
Phenomenal job. (I only found grammar mistakes)
I wish the best for you and your family.