Love, Rose

United Kingdom

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love Rose

Violent sonnet

November 27, 2020

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She speaks a violent sonnet 
Whos words lash and thrash me
Hard and fast and angry 
Like the mumbling of virtue 
‘Give me heavenly hurt’ she makes me say
With the drag of her cigarette
she's finishes that haggard air
And presses those consummate embers into my skin
Till my screams and pleas turn to ashes in her mouth 
‘Please’ I cry 
My easy words falling like honey onto the floor 
Still agog with my tortuous angel who stand before me 
she bends down 
Holds my face in her hands 
Wipes the tears and sweat from my brow 
And whispers soft 
‘How can I ?’

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8 Comments
  • Just_A_Memory

    The tones of this are phenomenal!!


    7 months ago
  • Starting Anew! (still Coolgirl though)

    Just reviewed this! <3


    7 months ago
  • Ree Sethu

    WOW! I am speechless...


    10 months ago
  • løne wølf

    im at a loss for words. this is so powerful <3

    re: thank you!! your kind words mean so much to me :)


    10 months ago
  • birthdaycandles

    wow u are literally SO talented


    10 months ago
  • acrosstheuniverse28

    This is so amazing! Beautiful work!


    10 months ago
  • Starlitskies

    Woah this is so beautiful!!! You nailed that ending.
    Re: Thank you for your comment!


    10 months ago
  • chrysanthemums&ink

    ooooooh the tone of this is amazing! not to mention the subtle (?) rhyme of "cry" and "i" at the end. just... wow. i'm blown away.


    10 months ago