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~Francis Chan
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The Sharp Edges of Reality

November 27, 2020

FREE WRITING

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Sparkling golden trees of amethyst glimmer in the tropical breeze
Girls with frilly porcelain dresses dance through the swaying finger-like grass
Crabs scuttle across the sugar powdered sand, their shells studded with emerald drops of ocean water
Sunshine glows through sheet-white skin, baking it to red brick perfection
A child sits alone in a garbage waterfall that overflows the cement overhang
He reaches for the sparkling trees, pretty girls, beautiful crabs and hot sun, but only brushes the sharp edges of reality.

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9 Comments
  • Cedric Diggory

    Are you mad at me :(


    3 months ago
  • Cedric Diggory

    Good morning I live you so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so much <3 nuzzle


    4 months ago
  • Cedric Diggory

    Nuzzle ok we talk more later i try to be da best boyfriend i can be <3


    4 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    the imagery in this is stunning! simply gorgeous. i can clearly picture each vivid color! SO beautiful <33


    5 months ago
  • anemoia (#words)

    re: thanks! yes, ben rector is pretty awesome. i don't know a lot of his music, but what i do, i like. but rn i'm discovering sleeping at last. indescribably beautiful.


    5 months ago
  • anemoia (#words)

    Wow. what a concept. gorgeous imagery. and the title/last line is... wow.


    5 months ago
  • Someoneyouusedtoknow

    Great piece!
    Yay! You're still here!


    5 months ago
  • Estera Ulrich-Oltean

    Love this! Well done :)


    5 months ago
  • Lata.B

    Re- thats okay!!
    Wow i love all your pieces!! OMG!!


    5 months ago