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And it Took What we Had Built

By: Maria


PROMPT: WILD

 When you let wild run

what else what would you expect

but to be outdone

 

Years we took to build a tower

arching, elegant, 

the height of our power

 

But the storms did blow

the stones did fall

and the vines did grow

 

And soon we were left with broken stones

paving shattered streets

that hid bleached bones

 

And  the wild took what we had built

and left our masterpiece in ruins

 



Peer Review

All of it!!


It invokes failure in me. First success, then failure.


Reviewer Comments

I love the fact that it rhymes.