kai blue

United States

sometimes i forget that i’m not lost

Message from Writer

“The best lies about me are the ones I told.” -Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind

the places i’d like to be that aren’t here

November 25, 2020

FREE WRITING

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the clouds seem like a nice place to be
i’d like to  f l o a t
mind wandering throughout the sky
my heart paving my path

the stars seem like a nice place to dance
musicless, yes, but you can close your eyes
and never lose your way
your feet knowing the path it’s taken
a thousand times before

but alas, i’m stuck on the ground
so i sit in my quiet room, and dream
i dream of what it would be like to 
wander through the clouds
or dance among the stars
hello, it’s me kai blue again! i’d like to thank everyone for the warm welcome, it means a lot to me. genuinely. thank you

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12 Comments
  • lochnessie

    wow i really love this! exhaled for first time in weeks lol
    hope you're having a good day!!! ~ness <3


    6 months ago
  • Busssy.Beee

    i echo everyone below! fsr it was really really heartfelt, nicely written!


    6 months ago
  • pyrrhic

    re: i'd LOVE that!!!!!!!!! let me know when you finish, alright! i need to be the first person to see it >:)


    6 months ago
  • beth r.

    wow this piece brings me peace (k excuse the pun XD) but seriously you are very talented! this poem is well developed, and lets off very serene vibes.
    I don't think I've met you before, so welcome to WtW! so glad you're here! I'm Beth, lmk if you need anything- can't wait to read more of your work!


    6 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    Wow, beautiful! I was stressed but then i read this and just ahhhhhhh...
    I love this!


    6 months ago
  • anemoia by a thread

    ahhh what a soothing and lovely piece


    6 months ago
  • mirkat

    awww, this was so beautiful and sweet and made me happy and kinda nostalgic and sad all at once.... and you are totally welcome! <3<3<3


    6 months ago
  • everythingbagel (the cliffhanger goddess)

    this is so wholesome omg


    6 months ago
  • rainydayz

    omg. this is beautiful. i’m literally in love. i can’t put into words how much i LOVE this piece. keep up the great work :)


    6 months ago
  • psithurism

    Ooh I love the vibe! Fantastic!


    6 months ago
  • pyrrhic

    re: oh my goodness, you are SO SWEET. ahhh!!!! i’m so glad that i helped you! from what i’ve seen so far, you’re writing is phenomenal, and i can’t wait to see more. i’d also love to get to know you better! <33


    6 months ago
  • pyrrhic

    this is so well done!!
    re: huh... we do seem to have a lot in common... i like your quote, btw! :)


    6 months ago