LaurenBeeWrites

United States

Name: Amanda
Explanation for username: It's a Spongebob joke
Bands: Waterparks/MCR/TOP
Books: Hunger Games/Shatter Me series
~Teen writer/author~
~Youtube channels~
~Christian~

QUOTE:
"Feel free to feel."

Message to Readers

I am open to peer review!! :)

The Little Girl's Wishes

November 25, 2020

FREE WRITING

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        The trees sway with passion aged like fine wine. 
    The wind rustles the world's branches and rocks the planet's pressure on the little girl.
        She sits.
            She waits.
                She
                                    w a n d e r s.
 
          The child smiles and looks straight at the sun, not regarding her mother's strict orders.
    The flaming star spares her and grins back, bringing a little sweet giggle out into the world filled with
devastation.
    The girl lives in another world.
                                                            They all do.
    

Youth is precious.
    Adolescence is rebellious.
Elder is wise.
   
She wouldn't know those words from one another.
    She sees through her little lense of daisies and marigolds and I wish her shield wouldn't break.

                                    It will. 
                                    Mine did.

    Maybe she will shine through onto the other side. 
    Maybe the world won't steal her smile.
 
 
Hey WTW,

I know it has been a while! I have been super involved in my new novel I am working on, BUT I am back!!!! Also...it's official...I completed NaNoWriMo and wrote over 50k words!!! This is my first NaNoWriMo and is a huge deal to me. I am not done with my novel, so I will still be writing probably through part of December but I see completing the challenge as motivation to keep going! I am also very excited to possibly be working on a short story/stories. 

Hope y'all have an amazing day/night!!!

-Amanda 

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  • anemoia (#words)

    Ahhhh i love it soo much it's so precious and lovely


    5 months ago