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Anyone ever write a six-word memoir? Doing this felt a little like that. Do any resonate?
My favorite essay was the one about taking care to touching people who have disabilities with love.
It speaks to me on a personal level because I have a brother who has Asperger's, but also on a universal level because many people don't understand those who have disabilities, so this 10 second essay can speak to those people as well.
These are interesting essays. Though they stand together, as one piece of writing, they stand alone, too, and each one is unique. I hope to see some more of your writing soon.