CreativeAngel

United States

I love writing. Writing can express feelings in many different ways. We can share what we wish without speaking.
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Practice makes Perfect.
If you aren't a good writer now, practice and you will be.
Mistakes will come and go but don't dwell on them too much.

My Annoying Brother

November 24, 2020

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He smacks his lips when he eats food. 
He stomps his feet when he’s being rude. 
And when he has headphones on his head, 
He yells as if the house is dead. 
His voice is so loud, 
That no one else’s can be found. 
He laughs after insulting me, 
Even if our parents can see. 
He jokes all day long, 
And is as tiring as a repeated song. 
But he’s okay, 
When he goes away. 
Ok so my brother is nice sometimes but I was running out of ideas and the example was also on someone's brother at the time. My brother makes good smores so it's okay ig :)

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6 Comments
  • CreativeAngel

    I LOVE ALL OF YOU!
    And luckily my brother doesn't like to write like me so he isn't even on here xD


    10 months ago
  • katnissromanoff

    Haha, this was so funny!!! I loved it! I can definitely relate to parts of this lol


    10 months ago
  • ChimChim_1

    Her brother be like OwO when he reads this.XD


    10 months ago
  • Starlitskies

    Omg I love this!!! Your use of rhymes and how direct you are works brilliantly with the humor. I was smiling as I read the poem but the last two lines had me laughing. And I must say I can relate. Even my brother can be super annoying sometimes. Okay fine, most of the time. :)


    10 months ago
  • CreativeAngel

    Thank you! Glad I can make people smile :)


    10 months ago
  • Bertrand

    I like the humor in this piece:) the lines left me with a smile by the way!


    10 months ago