~madeline~

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euphoria fashioned from stanzas of

disillusionment

est. 8.19.20

Message to Readers

My 2nd attempt at song writing. Funny story. Dreamed last night about me writing a song and the only lines a could remember were about 'she' and 'the moon'. This was based off of that... XD

The Ladder To the Moon (Song?)

November 23, 2020

FREE WRITING

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She dreams of the moon
And it's place in the sky
Somewhere twixt right now and soon

She dreams of the starlight 
And someday she'll fly
Up to the place where the day meets the night

Cause a dream is a fact that is only just waiting
Waiting till it turns to truth
And a dream is the light that is only just waiting
Waiting till the switch is flipped

The light on the moon
Is a shadow on earth
And dreams will come true
Tomorrow she'll climb the ladder
To the moon

She dreams of a flower
with colors so bright
A time where the blooms glow bright at each hour

She dreams of a mountain
Up high in the light
A place where the dreams will overcome pain

Cause a dream is a fact that is only just waiting
waiting till it turns to truth
And a dream is the light that is only just waiting
waiting till the switch is flipped

The light on the moon
Is a shadow on earth
And dreams will come true
Tomorrow she'll climb the ladder
To the moon

Tomorrow she'll climb the ladder
To the moon

She dreams of the moon
And it's place in the sky
Somewhere twixt right now and soon

Tomorrow she'll climb the ladder
To the moon

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20 Comments
  • serein

    dude this is so cool! I wish there was a way for me to hear the tune!


    5 months ago
  • In Which Yaya Writes

    Wow, this is amazing!!! I've never tried writing a song before (well, probably when I was like 7, XD). I loved this line, "She dreams of the moon, And it's place in the sky, Somewhere twixt right now and soon." Ah, that's beautiful!
    Replying: Aw, thank you! I've seen that quote before. Wasn't it FantasyOtter12? But that does make poetry so much more fun. Thank you!


    6 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Re: XD That’s so cool that you dreamed about me tho! :)


    6 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Re: awww, really?! That’s so cool! Do you happen to remember if you knew what I looked like, XD? I was just curious! Thank you for sharing! That’s so neat!


    6 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Re: yes! That’s probably the best way to do it if you want a good rhyme!


    6 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: Oh yes of course


    6 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Re: yes! Because you find the perfect phrasing and then it doesn’t rhyme at ALL!


    6 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: Hrmmmm okay but only if we get to visit him


    6 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: Aww thank you!!

    Hehe "If you really loved him you would share him" gosh I did not just use that quote I'm dead


    6 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Re: THANK YOU! Okay, I’ll def keep that advice in mind; rhyming is really hard! So thank you so much! I’m glad you like it! I put my heart into it, so I’m glad the message is strong. :)


    6 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Re: aw, thanks so much!! Also, I wrote a song (my first serious one) earlier! It’s called I’m here if you get the chance to check it out; I’d love to hear your thoughts if you have time!


    6 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    GORGEOUS!!!! Wow, this definitely needs to be a song! I love this so much! <3333


    6 months ago
  • spectral

    re: patchwork
    correct. assuming you caught all 3, there are 15 left.


    6 months ago
  • beth r.

    love this! the title is EVERYTHING!
    re: thanks! yeah, i would love if people used that piece as a prompt so we could all learn some new stuff i guess lol


    6 months ago
  • everythingbagel (the cliffhanger goddess)

    re: don't fail math, please. it's important.


    6 months ago
  • ~Zoe N~

    re: yeah... True, thanks :)


    6 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: Oh my gawwwsh thank you!!


    6 months ago
  • anemoia by a thread

    This is lovely. Definitely could be a song. Maybe change “twixt” to “betwixt” for musical flow ?


    6 months ago
  • Jj101

    Love it!! Great repetition and overall wow!


    6 months ago
  • everythingbagel (the cliffhanger goddess)

    Ooh, interesting.


    6 months ago