Rohan’s Defender

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She
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Feelings

November 21, 2020

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Mind in a whirl
Thoughts are a storm
Not sure where they came from
Not sure why they’re here

I push down these feelings
I don’t need them 
They’ll only cause pain
But they keep surprising me

I should push them out
Try to fight this new emotion
I should know my heart doesn’t
Need this

Because one second
I’m going on about my day
The next second I’m 
Thinking about this new feeling

One second I’m trying not give in
I try to reason my way out
Don’t lose control 
But the heart is a fragile thing

One second I’m smiling
My heart daring to dream
The next second I feel a pang of
Reality
 
I should force myself not to 
Feel this way
I should close the door
But to be honest

Sometimes I’m curious 
Why do I feel like this?
But then it hits me again
Why do I feel like this?
How is everyone? 

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4 Comments
  • Anne Blackwood

    Oh yeah, I'd love to comment on this! The first time I read this I was rushed so that's why I didn't. I really like this piece. It communicates your emotions in an effective way, and I definitely remember feeling like this many times.


    1 day ago
  • Busssy.Beee

    I echo everyone below. And then the lines, "I should push them out; Try to fight this new emotion" YESSS, i have felt that exact way. This piece overall is so good.


    1 day ago
  • acrosstheuniverse28

    Love this, your writing portrays this "whirlwind" of feelings so well! I'm doing great this week, how about you? ;)


    1 day ago
  • katnissromanoff

    This is beautiful. It's so touching and sweet and emotional. The piece is so well-written and just absolutely stunning. Amazing job!!! :):)
    I'm doing pretty well, how are you?


    2 days ago