THIS IS A COLLECTION OF SHORT POEMS UNDER A SINGLE TITLE
LII. there are times
when i pity those who couldn't tame you
but you cannot be harnessed
they were fools to think they could.
but they asked for me,
and so i plucked you from their heart,
and placed you in a bag.
What did you think when you read that? What did you feel? Even if it was the most unintelligible scene or incomprehensible nonsense, tell me, please. I'd like to know?
5 Comments
aiyanna
Ooh, this is awesome. Kinda like to think of it as speaking about a person almost, instead of stars. I like the fluidity of it, very nice
Paisley Blue
oh man... echoing the comments before me, i think this is my favorite so far, for reasons completely impossible to explain. gosh... beautiful...
abby.a
i think this one is my favorite. i'm not sure i can really explain why without sounding like a fool... but it's my favorite. :) great work
Deleted User
This is so deep, and bursting with emotion I can't quite identify. I gives me a feeling of hope. You are one talented guy.
-Sam
R.j.Elsewhere
This. THIS ONE. Is my favourite <3