Cosmogyral

United States

and i am tired,
so very tired.

an ode to the stars i stole from the sky

November 20, 2020

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LII. there are times
when i pity those who couldn't tame you
but you cannot be harnessed
they were fools to think they could.
       but they asked for me,
and so i plucked you from their heart,
and placed you in a bag.



What did you think when you read that? What did you feel? Even if it was the most unintelligible scene or incomprehensible nonsense, tell me, please. I'd like to know?
i personally love this one.

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5 Comments
  • aiyanna

    Ooh, this is awesome. Kinda like to think of it as speaking about a person almost, instead of stars. I like the fluidity of it, very nice


    3 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    oh man... echoing the comments before me, i think this is my favorite so far, for reasons completely impossible to explain. gosh... beautiful...


    3 months ago
  • abby.a

    i think this one is my favorite. i'm not sure i can really explain why without sounding like a fool... but it's my favorite. :) great work


    3 months ago
  • Deleted User

    This is so deep, and bursting with emotion I can't quite identify. I gives me a feeling of hope. You are one talented guy.
    -Sam


    3 months ago
  • R.j.Elsewhere

    This. THIS ONE. Is my favourite <3


    3 months ago