ChocolateKiwi

United States

Hi!
I’m Kiara,
She/Her
14,
Writer that loves giving and receiving feedback
Active since June 2, 2020

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~writing hiatus~
Thank you so much for 150+

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I’m really bad at titles any ideas are welcome, no idea is a bad one!

Thank you for reading my writing! Have a great rest of your day!

Keep Trying, You’ll Succeed If You Just Try

November 19, 2020

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When all you can do is try.

You can try to succeed.

You can try to be happy.

You can try to find the meaning of life.

You can try.

When all you can do is try

to get the right answer.

Trying is the most important thing.

If you don’t try

you won’t succeed,

and if your anything like me,

if you don’t succeed you aren’t happy.

Trying is the best.

If you try to find the meaning of life

stop,

look at the world like it,

don’t try.

If you're trying to fly,

you will,

you’ll soar through all the clouds,

you’ll soar on above the mountains,

you’ll soar.

If you see a shooting star,

run,

try to catch it.

It’s like your dreams,

try to catch that star,

try to catch that dream.

No matter how many trees 

or mountains it takes

or oceans,

You will catch that star,

if you try.

Trying,

try,

just

try

somday,

you’ll

succeed.

 
Yeah, trying to be positive because a few of my last pieces haven’t been that positive. I hope you enjoyed! How is it going? 

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  • Rose A(hiatus)

    This was good! Very positive vibes. I'm pretty good, how about you?


    6 months ago