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Ten things I wish we're true and ten then I wish weren't true.

By: Lizzie


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Ten things I wish were true and weren't true are: 1. Pigs could fly 2. Food could talk 3. Humans could float in mid air 4. Drama didn't exist 5. People could have magical powers

  1. Death wasn't inevitable
  2. My dad hadn't passed on
  3. I could live with my mom
  4. Cancer didn't exists
  5. Crime didn't happen

Give me your honest opinions on my writing but be respectful and kind.


Peer Review




Reviewer Comments

This is such a fun and creative list, yet interesting and very agreeable! Great job.