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I’m drowning inside and no one can seem in to hear my cries(footnotes)

November 18, 2020

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I’m drowning inside and no one can seem to hear my cries, 
Above a puddle of tears with moist cheeks and red eyes, 
The happiness and energy I had long ago died,
Replaced with stress and emptiness but don’t worry guys,
I’ll come up with a compromise, 
This is not my demise, 
Yet I’m so unwise,
I watch the beautiful sunrise,
But I deserve to agonize,
I’m in a world of hurt,
And no one can seem to hear my cries. 
 
So I did this thing in Choir where we had to come up with a line to sing that rhymes with a line in the song we were singing. My line was “I’m drowning inside and no one can seem to hear my cries.” Um.. yea depressing but it was what inspired this poem. If you feel like this, just know you are not alone and there are people out there that want to help you. It’s a short poem idk I might make it longer but probably not. 

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4 Comments
  • ava09 (sorta back)

    this is sad but beautifully written. the rhymes are so well done, like crystalline•galaxies said. :)


    6 months ago
  • doodleninja

    lovely rhyming here and some beautiful lines! I really like "I watch the beautiful sunrise / But I deserve to agonize"
    (also, depressing stuff is totally my cup of tea, so I thoroughly enjoyed this :D)


    6 months ago
  • Love, Rose

    this is stunning


    6 months ago
  • crystalline•galaxies

    this is absolutely gorgeous. it's so hard to find even a couple of words that rhyme, let alone write an entire rhyming poem. fantastic work!


    6 months ago