Abrianna

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Embracing Brown

December 18, 2020

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I fell into the brown sparkles/the brown waves closed my eyes/they took me under and down/down into the kind warmth/I fell in love with the depth of brown/the color of coffee that was glass/the way they flashed/engulfed me whole/and I loved them/and love them still/the kind brown that warms my soul/the brown that smiles on their own/and I cannot climb out/I do not want to/I am enclosed with an embrace/an embrace that I feel still/and always/the embrace of brown

-Abrianna:)
This is a description of someone's eyes, the kind of eyes that made me feel tdo special.:)

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5 Comments
  • nolongeractive

    I love this piece and I am obsessed with the power and message it carries, you have unbelievable talent and your writing is going to change the world one day!


    about 2 months ago
  • Rachaelgrace

    Oh wow! I love this. The way you captured the value and beauty of brown is awesome!


    6 months ago
  • musicmaker

    I LOVE brown eyes!!!! Great Description!

    re: Yes! Who decided the plural of moose would still be moose?!


    6 months ago
  • Emi

    This is so pretty! I think it's amazing that you can describe an eye color so vividly and for so long.


    6 months ago
  • anemoia (#words)

    awwww this is just a cozy and comforting piece


    6 months ago