ChocolateKiwi

United States

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I’m Kiara,
She/Her
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Active since June 2, 2020

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My Best Friend Kiara (title ideas?)

November 16, 2020

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My best friend is usually
sad 
or tired
but she will always put a smile on your face.

My best friend,
she is super energetic,
always willing to try new things,
if it isn’t against the law.

My best friend,
might be so confused some days,
that she doesn’t know what she’s saying half the time,
but she still says it.

My best friend
loves to sing
but she’s not very good at many things,
other than watching Netflix.

My best friend,
lies,
she lies all the time.
She thinks I don’t know she’s lying to me,
But in her eye’s you can tell.

My best friend Kiara,
her name rhymes with tiara,
sometimes she can’t pronounce her name,
and sometimes she hates it so much
that she wants to change it,
but she knows her name is a part of her
and who she is.

My best friend,
she can put a smile on your face,
even if there wasn’t one on hers before.

My best friend,
is bad at doing things,
but she will try and do her best and continue to do them.

My best friend
lies with her eyes
and knows that I know she is,
but does it anyway.

My best friend,
is
confused,
and
not a great friend,
but I know she’ll be my best friend
forever,
because without her,
I can’t even fake a smile.
 
I know this is super late, but I had writers block and I have been super busy with school and stuff, but thank you poetri for the amazing prompt to write about if I were my own best friend! 

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5 Comments
  • SunV

    Hey Kiara! I wanted to thank you, for everything. And hopefully lift your spirits.

    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/204853/version/421014


    5 months ago
  • Rose A(hiatus)

    Wow. This was such a sweet piece! But hold up... what do you mean you're bad at everything? I think me and the rest of your 133 followers can agree that that is incorrect. I understand hating your name. My name is literally Jenifer with one N. I can't write it without google complaining.


    6 months ago
  • anemoia (#words)

    Wow. i especially was touched by the part about your name, how it's part of you even when you don't like it. i actually knew a kiara who was also called kiwi.


    6 months ago
  • Rachaelgrace

    This is so awesome. Nice job :)


    6 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Kiara is actually in like my top 30 names of all time so... Anyway, I like what you did with the prompt.


    6 months ago