Love, Rose

United Kingdom

as always

nolite te bastardes carborundorum

vive la revolution

Message to Readers

any feedback would be highly appreciated

love Rose

we are all sinners, I suppose ( Review for review ? )

November 16, 2020

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Take this cup away from me 
For i don't think I’ll be what you think 
Or hope 
I’ll be 
I’ve found God in the corner of my room 
Staring down at me  
Into my very being, young as it is  
Taking the breath from my lungs 
And Transforming that ruthless kicking relief 
Into pure lupus Gold 
That makes my skin Rosy and lucas
Poor Judas 
Will I be betrayed with a kiss 
If i except him into my heart 
Will there be music, Judas 
When cupid comes to collect my wandering heart 
What happened to yours, Did it stray too far, Judas ?
Was your love to powerful, did it crush  
Or instead, will incubus 
Come and lay me down 
In the ground 
With my doubts falling like soil overhead 
Waiting for my fate, 
always tomorrow 
I’ve noted Doubting can be such sweet sorrow
When you give yourself over to temptation
Judas come lay with me awhile 
Tell me what not to desire 
And God, please be clear 
Don't leave me too weary 
Appear to tell me 
To help me 
To Make me dare 
For I think I’m almost there
I'm really not sure with this one, but still i wanted to try.

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6 Comments
  • anemoia (#words)

    wow. this is incredible and striking
    Re: thanks so much for the comment!


    6 months ago
  • Rose A(hiatus)

    Re: haha. thank you.


    6 months ago
  • Rose A(hiatus)

    Thank you for the compliment! it means a lot. :)
    This is also very stunning. How have I not seen your profile before? You're clearly awesome.


    6 months ago
  • mystifiedtulip

    I really like how much expression there is in this. As the other writers already mentioned, the Biblical references show a lot and portray a lot! Great job!

    re: if there was a, "heart a comment option", i would've did that for yours! tysm <3


    6 months ago
  • Emi

    I love the Biblical references! Really shows a lot more feelings in here and the feeling of desperation.


    6 months ago
  • crystalline•galaxies

    all of the Biblical references in there really bring out the phrasing of the title. great piece!


    6 months ago