Baby sis calls me Yaya
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Hi, welcome to the place in which I ask questions for reviewers XD.
Grammarly says my tone is "Worried" and "Formal." Do you agree?
What time period do you think this is? Different than 2019?
Are there any parts that are wordy or confusing? I'd rather you not have to read a sentence twice to understand.
Are there any places I should expand? Perhaps on characters?
Are there any places that could be swapped with something more interesting?
Is it a nice ending?
Any other feedback (including likes and comments) are greatly appreciated! Please bear with me as I struggle through this XD.
Oh, also, does anyone do research for their fiction? I looked up classic books, how many chapters were in Anne of Green Gables (and an overview of each chapter was included) and who wrote it, if possums were marsupials, what they ate, fancy names, common last names, common Hispanic names with meaning, and common Hispanic last names. I just don't know if other people do, too XD.
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November 16, 2020