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Message to Readers
A NOTE FROM THE AUTHOR
hey there reader!!! this is the prologue for my new story! I hope you like it! i will be posting more chapters in the story later. feel free to give any feedback you would like! it is greatly appreciated. hope to hear from you all soon!
The highly descriptive text gave me a good feeling aboit this piece
Perhaps a sentence such as "All their work had led to this", but only if thats actually what this is and if you want to though!
I would love to read the full thing, chapter by chapter