AJ - Izzy

Canada

How to write all of me in less than 10 seconds?

Hmm, let me think... how about DREAMER?

Yup. That works.

Message to Readers

Note to self: "Your intellect might be confused, but your emotions will never lie to you." -Roger Ebert

Muddled Tears

November 11, 2020

FREE WRITING

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it hurts. 
when the one you love,
     who can always make you laugh
        who brings out your smile just by looking at you
            who brightens your darkest days and has the warmest hugs

is also the one who makes you cry.

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8 Comments
  • -bellabean-

    re: Of course! Thank you so much you are so sweet. I'm glad my little message helped you. By the way beautiful writing! It's amazing and really touches me.


    11 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Re: Thank you so much!


    11 months ago
  • pyrrhic

    re: you're so sweet! and i'll actually try that out! thank you! :)


    11 months ago
  • ANSON REYNOLDS

    beautiful piece <333
    re: I am so glad I'm not the only one who writes three pages for a one page essay!!! It's like playing wack-a-mole with my time- how quickly can I hammer out my actual homework because I KNOW how much time I'm going to waste once I start on English XD


    11 months ago
  • iamgroot

    re: Thank you so much!


    11 months ago
  • katnissromanoff

    This is so beautifully written and so sad. It's so true, I think that what Abby.a said was exactly how it feels. This is such an emotional piece, fantastic job


    11 months ago
  • pyrrhic

    i understand. i'm sorry that you understand, too. it hurts more when the people making you cry are the ones who are supposed to support you while you cry instead.


    11 months ago
  • mirkat

    oh this is tearjerking and heartbreaking and i hope it gets better? ahhh the way you explained this.... sorrowful and beautiful and lovely. <3


    11 months ago