mirkat

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est. 10/15/20

"take me with you, finished thing"
"too dizzying to love anywhere
but from a distance"

have an ineffable day!

<3<3<3

Message to Readers

anything?

stardust iii.

November 11, 2020

FREE WRITING

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and it's not to say/i haven't/enjoyed life/here on earth/
                        but i know/i am made from sky/and stars/and universe/
i am something/more that can't be/described/
                        i must/traverse/the planets/
and see/where/i was forged/in the center/of a star/
                        not until then/will i know/why universe/claims me as/her own








 
parts i. and ii. if you missed them.

what do you think as you read this? what do think/want to happen after this in my poem story thingie (cause' that's what it's called lol)? wow, i'm making you guys sit thru english class here. sorry bout that! <3<3<3

much love! <3

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7 Comments
  • AJ - Izzy

    The best english class ever though XD
    I'm just going through this amazing collection, wow. Wow wow, I don't know how to express my awe, they're amazing. Literal chills, how are you so talented? <33


    6 months ago
  • katnissromanoff

    These stardust poems are so.... I don't even know what the word is, amazing at the least. They are phenomenal. I love this so much!!


    6 months ago
  • Jason_claire :)

    Replying- Aw thanks, and yeah, totally!


    6 months ago
  • Jason_claire :)

    The way you used traverse just made my day, I love that word. I like the mixed emotions. Maybe talk about your physical form while tied to stars, planets, black holes, etc. I dunno just an opinion :)


    6 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    ooooooooooh i love this <33333 yay!!!! So good!!!
    re: OOH yes I knew something was missing!!! Thank you so so so much for the suggestion--I will add that FOR SURE. :D


    6 months ago
  • pyrrhic

    i wanted to try and pick out my favorite lines, but how am i supposed to do that when the whole thing is PERFECT??! i can't very well copy and paste the whole poem! if you couldn't tell, i LOVE THIS PIECE SO MUCH.


    6 months ago
  • anemoia (#words)

    ahhhhhh
    i can't
    it's so lovely


    6 months ago