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This is absolutely amazing. I love how you don't give even an inkling as to what it could be. Way to keep the suspense.
Who exactly is Margret? Are Mary and Taylor best friends? Or something more?
There was a few spelling mistakes, like whether instead of weather, happens to me all the time lol, nothing big though. This piece was really well written and it captured and held my attention throughout the whole piece. Great job!