BizzleWrites

Australia

I'm Issy.
I'm 14 and an aspiring artist and author.
She/her
Black Lives matter.
Likes:
Bi puns
Murder mystery TV shows
Art
Shakespeare poetry
Dislikes:
I can't even be bothered writing them all down
.
Goodbi
Have a nice day

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Remember to write even if you think you are bad at it, you're not

Watching

November 8, 2020

The undeniable truth around the paths 
The ones that eucalyptus takes over
The purplish silver of shadows duly cast 
On the ground the lovely dandelions and clover

And from the shadows, untamed ravens watch 
Their eyes as dark as night and ruined minds
And the eucalyptus flowers, a scarlet splotch 
But little of this southern desert truly defines
The creatures lurking in our stolen minds

From the long grass a serpent watches
It's glistening eyes are never blinking 
The sandy earth is owned by little crosses
In the muddy swamp a branch is slowly sinking

The beauty of the stolen lands and grasses
The golden light on the trees and in the sky
And when the sun sinks over the earth into Apollo's casket
All mortals and ravens know is a world of lies
And all the crawling mortals hate for us we despise 

Now the lonely night is sinking slow and deep
The ravens are cawing their woeful song 
The innocent beings lay down to sleep
But their innocence won't last for long

The morning sun appears on the horizon 
And the ravens amble aimlessly 
The ravens watch from the shadows in silence
Advising us to foolery 
Their eyes as dark-opal jewelery 
It includes watch or some version of it three times. 

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  • November 8, 2020 - 10:21pm (Now Viewing)

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3 Comments
  • mirkat

    this is beautiful! i love it and the imagery is phenomenal. also i crack up every time i see your bi pun of goodbi in ur bi(o) for no good reason... its just so funny to me idk why! and i'm not even bi! welp XD keep writing! <3


    6 months ago
  • Lata.B

    Re- Thank you so much!! Would you like me to review anything of yours?


    6 months ago
  • AJ - Izzy

    I love the imagery! And the wording as well, it's elegant and really well said, I love "The purplish silver of shadows duly cast"... ah, it's so good. Great writing :)


    6 months ago