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this was really hard for me to write.

my friend can't mold herself to the right shape

November 8, 2020

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my friend looks in the mirror each day
and longs for a sculpted body
and hair that boys can weave 
their hair through
when lips are aligned
in perfection. 

she only sees a spotted
face
and glasses that make her eyes look
shrewd. 
freckles that are alligned
in the patterns of 
unknowns and anger.

that isn't what i see
i look beyond
the nailbitten fingers
and unkempt eyebrows
and see a soul
that's full of joy
but it cannot be
expressed in full.

 
write a poem as though you were your own best friend - poetri's prompt. 

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7 Comments
  • anemoia (#words)

    oh wow


    6 months ago
  • Anlee

    wow i have no words-
    i could marvel at your diction all day. such a powerful, beautiful poem <33


    6 months ago
  • poetri

    I LOVE THIS ONE! Especially the sharp line length contrasts in stanza two, almost felt like you were choking out the words and really added a gorgeous effect. Lovely work :)


    6 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    oh wow this is so powerful and so meaningful! Reading the footnotes and realizing this was about yourself (if i am understanding it right) made this so much more beautiful and meaningful. ALso I love the idea behind this prompt so i might try it out sometime.


    6 months ago
  • mirkat

    very relatable i feel you you are beautiful. <3


    6 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    wow... this is so simple and yet so powerful. you are beautiful <333


    6 months ago
  • ~madeline~

    Wow! This was really touching and so relatable!! Please know you are beautiful inside and out<3


    6 months ago