this was really hard for me to write.
Written By: dead account
November 8, 2020
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wow i have no words-
i could marvel at your diction all day. such a powerful, beautiful poem <33
I LOVE THIS ONE! Especially the sharp line length contrasts in stanza two, almost felt like you were choking out the words and really added a gorgeous effect. Lovely work :)
Stone of Jade
oh wow this is so powerful and so meaningful! Reading the footnotes and realizing this was about yourself (if i am understanding it right) made this so much more beautiful and meaningful. ALso I love the idea behind this prompt so i might try it out sometime.
very relatable i feel you you are beautiful. <3
wow... this is so simple and yet so powerful. you are beautiful <333
Wow! This was really touching and so relatable!! Please know you are beautiful inside and out<3
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