I enjoy reading and been doing this as my past time a lot.
Love cooking, and learning in general. But I am not overly fond of school.
I plan to try different styles through my 4 years I have here.
So, since this is my first short story (I actually completed), I'm going to need as much critique as I can for the next draft of this and for any future short stories. So what I could clear up, what things made the character pop out, what I could work on...etc.
Written By: Minvra
November 8, 2020