Cosmogyral

United States

and i am tired,
so very tired.

an ode to the stars i stole from the sky

November 9, 2020

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THIS IS A COLLECTION OF SHORT POEMS UNDER A SINGLE TITLE



XLVI. i do not cry for the thousands of souls
within the thousands of miles.
for not even a rainstorm can best a desert.



What did you think when you read that? What did you feel? Even if it was the most unintelligible scene or incomprehensible nonsense, tell me, please. I'd like to know.

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3 Comments
  • em wilder

    hopeless. but beautiful. <3


    4 months ago
  • Rachaelgrace (hiatus) :)

    Oh wow. This one gives me all the feels, truly. I think the despair that is in it reminds me a lot of The Horse and His Boy. I also love the repetition of the word thousands.


    4 months ago
  • Rose A

    Wow! That was so good! Definitely one of my favorites from your "an ode to the stars I stole from the sky" collection. Keep writing, and have a good day!


    4 months ago