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Anything would help! Tried to work on more sentence-by-sentence stuff, so if there's anything wrong there I'd love to know!
I like the imagery of this, how you expanded a small moment and made it larger.
The conversation is very well thought out and natural, and it says a lot about them. I could tell that Marina and Cal both were rather naive about the bad things that can happen to them.
The lengths are very good in this.
It's at a pool, and I know that one of the characters come from the North of New Jersey. I'd suggest for you to have a more specific place to further develop the story.
This is a very well-thought out story, and I like your writing style! Keep revising it, and it'll be even awesome-er than how it already is!
Sorry for the late review, I've been a little busy lately!