dream02

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I may post a lot. Just because I'm bored and writing is my life.
Why does putting me down make you feel better?
If you should ever ask how many times you've crossed my mind, I'd say once. Cause you came into my mind and never left

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OMIGOSH y'all! 50 followers!?!?! Y'all are amazing! <3
Breathe. Believe. Dream. Be kind.
Never let anyone take your passion away.
Writing and poetry are my escapes from reality.
Follow, I'll (most likely) follow back.
Racism, homophobia, and other prejudice isn't needed!
take that you dancing by Jason derulo, Smaller Than This by Sara Kays, and Not Ready For Love by Kim Caputo are my current songs on repeat in the mental asylum also known as my brain......

Your eyes, are my stars. Your smile, my sun. Your love, my purpose.

Forever a hopeless romantic......

My feet are on the ground but my head is high in the clouds....

"Loving you is a crime of which I shall never repent." - Sor Juana

Down. SLIGHT TRIGGER WARNING

November 11, 2020

FREE WRITING

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Darkness is back,
Pain inside is too.

No matter how much blood leaves, 
The pain is everlasting.

I feel like there's only one way out,
I'll end up in the ground though.

It's looking better and better,
Like it's the only option..

I'm falling....
                ......down
                          ........down

If I told you how I feel, would you help me?
If I came clean, would you hold me?
If I cried, would you dry my tears and kiss me?
 
Let me know what y'all think!!

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13 Comments
  • Figwit

    this is how I feel, only I'm not good enough to express it in words like you do. great job!


    about 2 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    It is Friday night (for me at least)--and I am posting early--the *sniff* final part of the heartbreak series. This is a bittersweet moment for me and I am so happy to share it with you <3
    here is the final link to the final part:
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/205205/version/421871


    about 2 months ago
  • Busssy.Beee

    CONGRASTTASTASTA ON 50!! YEAHAHAH!! CHEERS TO MANY MORE!! *raises cup to clink* :) and very well written piece!!


    about 2 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    oh man that last line is perfect. this is so sad yet so beautiful


    about 2 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    part 5 in my heartbreak series is out!!!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/205205/version/421871

    it's getting close to the end :(


    about 2 months ago
  • Lata.B

    Woah!! I love this!
    How are you? :)


    about 2 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    Part 4 of heartbreak series is out!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/203611/version/418062


    2 months ago
  • midnight.summerrose

    Oh wow!! This is amazing!! :)


    2 months ago
  • Anlee

    re: thank you for your comment. things have been tough recently but i am fine :) this is a wonderful piece that deserves so much more attention <33


    2 months ago
  • Hazel Nut

    replying to your comment on my piece that was then. yes, I am perfectly fine and I do not want to hurt myself. I just read a sad book so I was in a mood. but thank you very much for your support any way


    2 months ago
  • abby.a

    re: you're so sweet. i actually really needed that. thank you. don't forget you are so beautiful and talented, as well. <33


    2 months ago
  • AJ - Izzy

    re: thank you <3
    That last line though... "If I cried, would you dry my tears and kiss me?" As a great bunny father once said, "oh cripes, here come the waterworks." <3
    (that's from Zootopia lol)


    2 months ago
  • abby.a

    i can feel this piece deep in my soul, lodged in my sad heart


    2 months ago