He/Him ~ 19
Nature, Music, We/Us - In this Together

July 2020 - June 2021

The Moon in Red......

December 1, 2020


 The winds blew gently through the trees as I stepped out of the house. I could feel the pacific breeze thrust airily on my cheeks. The calls of the weaver birds had faded and the chirping of crickets was soaring in the serene night. Yawning and stretching my arms, I walked to the side of the house for a short glance at the sky - looking at the full moon gives a refreshing sleep!
 There up in the sky, far to the horizon, stood a glowing red Ball and its dim rays cast a brown sheet across the sky. “What has happened to my precious ball?” I wondered as I glared at the silhouettes of the little birds drifting bravely in the waxing night sky.
 I had seen it last month: the whitely greyish ball gliding the horizon at dusk that gently faded in the night black yonder. Then there came the small sailboat; floating flawlessly across the vast sky, and rowing fearlessly through the rushing winds. Slowly by slowly I saw it grow, shining brightly in the starless sky.
More birds had become brave and flew hastily through the heavens. I loved hearing them hum when I saw that diamond ball; it glittered faintly behind the leaves and the music had grown lyrical. I could feel the creaking of the branches.
 “This was a few months ago!”
 The cool breeze thrust my jowls and the red Moon was in my sight again; “Why is it glowing red?”
 I let out a deep breath, turned my eyes from that glowing red ball and walked to the back door. Everyone was already asleep; I tiptoed to my bed and softly lain on the slimy sheets. After a short stare around the black room, I towed the heavy blanket over my chest: “Why is it glowing red?”
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  • nolongeractive

    This is so pretty and simple yet relatable. I just love how emotional your writing it is, and how you pair it with so much simplicity. I cannot wait to see what you do next!

    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Re: Ty! Oh ok.

    7 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Wait are you a new community ambassador? Or did you just change your name.

    7 months ago
  • Parisienne

    Re: Hey rise! Just thought I'd say (since you asked me to) that the next bit of the girl in blue is out. Let me know what you think (if you like). Hope you're having a good day :D

    8 months ago
  • Parisienne

    re: I get what you mean and thanks. I'll let you know once I've done the next bit :)

    8 months ago
  • Parisienne

    re: thank you, of course I'll let you know! I'm still trying to decide whether I should make the girl in blue evil or good. What's your opinion?

    8 months ago
  • Parisienne

    re: thank you, I'm thinking of writing a longer version of the girl in blue soon, so more is on the way! Really like this piece btw, you create very vivid imagery :)

    8 months ago
  • Jason_claire :)

    You really have a way with words. The way you described birds flying; I didn't even know there were that many ways to describe birds in flight. The emotions expressed to the blood moon is amazing!
    replying- Aw, thank you :)

    8 months ago
  • useless :)

    re: thank you!! :)

    8 months ago
  • Love, Rose

    wow this is so cool- well done

    8 months ago
  • The Ravenclaw Dragon

    This is a very cool concept. And the descriptions are very good. "I loved hearing them hum when I saw that diamond ball; it glittered faintly behind the leaves and the music had grown lyrical. I could feel the creaking of the branches." Keep on writing!

    8 months ago
  • Starlitskies

    Wonderful use of imagery! There's melancholic beauty here! :)
    Re: Thank you so much for you comment on my piece! It really made my day! <3

    10 months ago
  • Rachaelgrace

    This is so good! I love the descriptions you use and the premise. Awesome job!
    Re: thank you so much!

    10 months ago