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moonlight steps

November 1, 2020

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the girl's path
was dotted with
spotlights
her feet are blinding
white crescents
she pirouettes
and leaps
from star to
star
without a care
in the world. 

that girl was me,
once upon a time.

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4 Comments
  • midnight.summerrose

    Wow, I love this!! :)


    11 months ago
  • Huba Huba

    Awh this poem is cute! Nice and simple :)


    11 months ago
  • mirkat

    oh, breathless! this is such a simple and sweet and nostalgic poem that is like also deep in some way? marvelous job, i love this! very relatable, too. i love your use of fairy tale language (once upon a time, crescents, pirouettes, star).... idk just language that is pretty.... <3<3<3


    11 months ago
  • Lata.B

    Oh aw I like this!


    11 months ago