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Message to Readers

This is basically an add on to "Please Love Me." Feel free to check it out!

How do I stop missing us?

November 1, 2020

PROMPT: Heart Places

 In your backyard, the sun on our faces. Your hand slipped in mine. Your smiling down at me, touching my hair. I giggle and look up at the sky. I'm wondering what your thinking about me. Do you think I'm some frivolous, naive middle schooler or do you see me as a beautiful young woman? You pull me close to you and I gasp as I feel your arms wrap around me. Then I relax and lean into you. You kiss the top of my head  and stroke the side of my face. You pull back and look into my eyes. You lean in and lick your lips. Then your lips are pressed against mine.

I open my eyes and look around remembering that I am alone. I remember that you are no longer here.  Something is missing. Is it you? Is it your kisses? No, it's us. I miss the place that used to be us. I miss me and you. You and me. I wonder what I can do to get you back. What can I do to get us back?

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  • mirkat

    this is beautiful and heartbreaking and wonderful all at once! the imagery and the flow... i love it. keep writing! <3<3<3

    3 months ago
  • AJ - Izzy

    Aw, this is beautiful! The description is amazing, I can really picture it and you have an excellent use of pathos; amazing piece! <3

    3 months ago