LaurenBeeWrites

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Name: Amanda
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Books: Hunger Games/Shatter Me series
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Confidence: part I

November 1, 2020

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Confidence wavers. 

It extinguishes itself like it was scared of catching fire and     
    running     
            away     
                with the             w i n d.

How can such a factorial, exclusively edifying concept possibly turn so

    F e r r a l

    With the spike of a controversial untouchable impulse.
Neurons fire off like lightning speed is a joke, worn gears begin to turn and 
    creak
and they need no oil to start spitting out sparks of anticipation.

Confidence ceases to hand out the charity it is renowned for
    
 l
   e
      a
        c
          h
            i
              n
                g  
  
into the human mind.

    Why would confidence be so
afraid of the world?
 

Some common thoughts might manifest to be, but not mine. 
    I don't think.

Confidence is a flawed human concept at it's best reputation, at it's worst it's an

    Unessisary
    Existing
    Impression 


On the impressionable youth     
    The naive adolescents     
        The brainwashed men and women     
           The broken elders.

Should we trust this monster?

    I will not give my unswerving piece of advice regarding humanity.
    I will give you     
                                n o t h i n g. 

You are tired.

Tired. Tired. Tired.                                         Tired.

    Maybe you should reach out into the void of ebony coated thoughts and grab yourself some
        Real confidence     
and let go of the     
wind-worn highschool notes that you     
crumple in your fists    
determined to

light them     
        ablaze. 

Introduce yourself to     
    credence
        reliance
            assertiveness
                Maybe even some lovely     
    
fortitude.

    And
    bring it

h o m e. 
  

 
 
   
 
Sooooooo...I tried to do some poetry? I don't know if this is technically considered poetry or not, but I was inspired by the pov The Book Theif is written in (aka deaths pov) and I was also inpired by mirkat and her poetry that I adore. (please follow her if you haven't already) I guess I could say my usual writing style is blend of poetic type writing with a lot of internal diolouge, but I tried to branch out and try some "poetry" without a real destined ending or begining, sorta just a theme of concousnes surrounding one word (confidence) I might do more of these later on, I don't know. I just thought I ought to try and tap into a differnet style and it was super fun! 

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2 Comments
  • Deleted User

    You did really well with the format on this!! Usually when people write like this, it ends up really confusing and hard to read, but you did soooooo good!!! :D


    6 months ago
  • anemoia (#words)

    I LOVED THE FORMAT, IT FELT LIKE SOMEONE WAS WHISPERING THIS IN THE DARKNESS.


    6 months ago