Cosmogyral

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'cosmogyral' means to twirl around the universe but i'm just caleb.

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i'm caleb nk sa, i like alt-lofi, poetry, feminism and plants. no, i did not leave out any letters of my name and yes, i have a cat.

an ode to the stars i stole from the sky

November 2, 2020

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THIS IS A COLLECTION OF SHORT POEMS UNDER A SINGLE TITLE


XLI. 'twas a thief, they called me
a madman in wake of arrogance
the predecessors stole their stars
in the haste of a fit
        had i not plucked their sorrows from their minds
they too, would rot
in the abyss of their sickly and blackened souls
the disgust that is humanity.

What did you think when you read that? What did you feel? Even if it was the most unintelligible scene or incomprehensible nonsense, tell me, please. I'd like to know

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5 Comments
  • Rachaelgrace

    I GET SO EXCITED WHEN YOU PUBLISH ANOTHER ONE OF THESE!! Seriously, they are so cool, and I love the question at the end.
    I imagined a medieval thief when I read this.


    6 months ago
  • mirkat

    wow. i don't know what to think or see! uh.... an old man and a graveyard and a string of sorrows coming from an open mouth. it's kinda hazy.... anyway. <3


    6 months ago
  • Hunter Lambert

    Really good I love it!


    6 months ago
  • dead account

    so many shakespearean vibes. i love this so muchhhhhhhh


    6 months ago
  • pyrrhic

    wow... i loved this. it brought forwards feelings of almost disgust and rebellion? i'm not sure if this is what you intended, but i imagined someone rebellion against a corrupt organization of some sort. i loved this so much.


    6 months ago