Cosmogyral

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i never wanted aottsisfts to be romantic

an ode to the stars i stole from the sky

November 1, 2020

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THIS IS A COLLECTION OF SHORT POEMS UNDER A SINGLE TITLE


XL. pt. i. i'd knelt on the cliff of time;
with the false sunlight blinding me
and it was warm,
and lovely.
              then the cycle of aching came to taunt me, 
night fell and solace arose in the form of the mother and her stars,



What did you think when you read that? What did you feel? Even if it was the most unintelligible scene or incomprehensible nonsense, tell me, please. I'd like to know.

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3 Comments
  • Rachaelgrace (hiatus) :)

    I really like this one! I thought of a scene from the book Enna Burning.


    4 months ago
  • em wilder

    i'm breathless whenever i read your work. it is splendid and explores so many real human emotions. i see a person leaning over a cliff/edge of a building. above them is the sun.... but it's not warm, it sends a ray of like cool energy down and below is past fears and memories and the impending night..... love it, i do. keep writing! <3


    4 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    Ahhhhh this is beautiful... <333 I love this


    4 months ago