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"If no one else will, you be the change."----Also me

Tell Me What is Wrong

October 31, 2020


Your eyes,
So full of passion yet something is missing,
Your hiding something from me,
How do I get you to open up,
and tell me what is really wrong?

Don't say your okay,
I know your not,
Scabbed up wounds on your arms,
Pain hidden behind your smile...
Your smile that makes me melt,
From my head to my toes,
Just tell me what is wrong?

Don't be fake,
I know that's not the real reason.
Tell me the truth.
I want to be there for you,
I want to help you,
Please just tell me the truth.

Don't say you love me,
I know you do...
Tell me what is wrong,
Say what is making you hurt, 
what is making you bleed.

But I know you won't,
I know you will keep it all inside so that I won't see a thing,
You'll change the subject,
Thinking I'll forget,
And I'll pretend like I don't notice,
But it's so obvious,
That you are sick.

Don't look at me like that,
Trying to distract me from the truth,
With your beautifully handsome face,
And your smile.

Others say your confident,
But I know that your not,
That your more insecure than I am.

Please, let me in,
I know you don't like to talk about it,
But you need to,
Because I can't lose you,
Please, tell me what is wrong?


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  • Anlee

    awww this is so lovely! i can really feel the passion and pleading~ beautiful <33

    6 months ago
  • anemoia (#words)

    such honesty and plaintive pleading here... incredible. and what do you mean, you don't have a lot posted?? i'd say 48 is a fair amount.

    6 months ago
  • Busssy.Beee

    Woah, this is really beautiful. Nicely written!!

    6 months ago