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I particularly loved it when you talked about the jock who "played for Notre Dame." It was so effortlessly witty and ironic, the dichotomy between a holy building and thoughtless disrespect for animals. Genius!
The broken lines really help highlight different words that you wouldn't ordinarily focus on, and it also gave the poem a lovely sharp-but-thoughtful tone.
This is so totally different from anything that I would immediately think of when given the prompt 'Wild,' and really refreshing and original. You're obviously a very talented poet and quite frankly I'm just a little bit awe-struck. I can't wait to read what you write next! :)