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idk what this is
Simple. Beautiful. Rhyme and meaning together. (That's so hard to do), and no punctuation! The title is stunning as well.
Nothing really. You've told a tale quite simply.
It's lovely how you created this chilling mood with the poem. The snow, the deaths of the homeless and why they die all bring out this feeling of coldness.