Starlitskies

Sri Lanka

She/Her
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est. 26 Oct 2020

Message to Readers

Please tell me if the dialogue doesn't flow properly. And also, have I used too many commas?

Always

October 30, 2020

PROMPT: All Talk

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"I'm sorry, I didn't mean to wake you up."

"That's okay."

"Can you please move closer."

"Of course...... hey, are you okay?"

"Yeah. Just a bad dream."

"What is it?"

"Doesn't matter. It's stupid."

"You're talking to the definition of 'stupid' here. Try me."

"..."

"..."

"I...I lost you to the ocean. You were standing on the shore and then the waves just swallowed you. And the worst part was.... I c-couldn't save you. I tried, Sia, but I couldn't move..... See, it's stupid! We live nowhere near the sea and you know how to swim and-and I definitely would've saved you! I'm sorry."

"Hey, you have nothing to be sorry for. I know you would if that ever happened, and trust me it never will."

"But it did."

"Once. And that was years ago. I was a stupid kid."

"..."

"Why are you smiling?"

"Just happy that the 'stupid kid' survived for me to fall in love with her. I love you, Sia."

"I love you too."

"Sia?"

"Yes?"

"Promise you'll stay close to me?"

"Always, darling. Always."

 
I've had this idea for quite a while and now I've found the perfect prompt to bring it to life! I Used the name 'Taylor' so you can picture a guy or a girl. :) 
Please let me know what you guys think.

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10 Comments
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: Okay, awesome!


    9 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Okay last shot: Sithara... that's all I could get lol.


    9 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    For your first name: Chandra, Selene/Selena, Ayla, Jacira, Mahina, Mona, Chandni, Koray, Amaris, Luan, Alkaina, Badriya, Celena, Chantara, Cynzia, Hala, Jyotsna/Jyoshna, Kamaria, Neoma, Nuray.
    For your middle name: Google has no idea so neither do I


    9 months ago
  • Shay

    Re: lol taekwondo kick is a thing but you know we don't call it taekwondo kick. And I'll be sure to do so


    10 months ago
  • BlueWolf (Semi Hiatus)

    Gorgeous! I really love this, it is just so touching and I like the idea.


    10 months ago
  • SunV

    This is amazing! I love your storyline!

    Hi! I'm SunV, and I wanted to welcome you to WtW! I've been on this site for over a year now, and it's a wonderful place! Feel free to reach out to me if you have any questions, I'll be sure to get back to you as soon as possible!


    11 months ago
  • tas (yellowbrickrd)

    re: Thank you for the lovely comments :)

    also this is so cutee!


    11 months ago
  • V-Rose

    Re: Thanks for your comment! Also, there is no chat thing on WtW. Sadly.


    11 months ago
  • mirkat

    love this! very sweet and heartwarming! the way the ppl talk is also very realistic. keep writing! <3


    11 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    awwwwww this is so sweet!! I love this!! The flow is perfect :)


    11 months ago