United States
Follower of Jesus
LOTR & Narnia
Wish Zuko was REAL
Gryffindor
XC runner
Oldest sister of 3
Enneagram 1
Team Keefe
Let's draw near to those who are suffering and fight injustice
I would love any feedback :)
Written By: Rachaelgrace
October 29, 2020
FREE WRITING
8 Comments
~wildflower~
Once again, a beautiful poem! I’ve never come across that flower before, but I really like it! This is my favourite line: “ We are all shifting shadows”
Westley
This is so pretty!
Re: There isn't exactly a story behind my profile pic. It's two of my characters, Fiere (purple guy) and Shadow (other guy). I just felt like drawing something sad. I do actually write a story about them here though, called emerging from the shadows.
Molly_
Re: thank you so much! I love reading through your work; it's beautifully put, and I especially love this one, although I'll admit I had to google Ixia Viridiflora
Rohan’s Defender
Re: thank you!
Stumbling Conundrum
Re: Thank you so much for your kind comment! I am so glad to know that we have things in common, I think that is so fun. I, too, love Narnia and LOTR. You have great taste! <3
Huba Huba
This is such a beautiful poem! I had to google the title, and it's truly a beautiful flower!
I see that while I'm making bird references using fancy bird names, you're making flower references while using fancy flower names :)
Emi (Revival Year #NEWYEAR)
Your similes, girl! Beautiful. I love the description in the first stanza; it's so unique and lovely.
rainydayz
omg i needed this in my life. ahh and the last line ties the piece together beautiful and hits the idea home to the reader (me lol). keep it up!!
re: thank you :)