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"i am made of memories."
-madeline miller, the song of achilles

“for victory is victory, however small, nor is its worth only from what follows from it.”
-j.r.r. tolkien, the children of húrin

"he was determined to discover the underlying logic behind the universe.
which was going to be hard, because there wasn't one.”
-terry pratchett, mort

a five-minute poem, written at the tail end of math class.

October 30, 2020


enter the depths of my mind;
swim in the possibilities of my reality.
keep safe everything i have let you find,
and let it float through the prospect of amorality.


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  • October 30, 2020 - 8:42pm (Now Viewing)

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  • Wisp

    Ughhh, it's so short, yet so beautiful. I wish I could pick it apart more and delve into it, but it's still so brilliant as it is. The shortness of it just adds a certain level of depth that wouldn't have been there without. The pretentious title is just finely chosen, the effect it has on the poem itself is just excruciatingly impactful. It really shows a gauge for your talent if you can create something like this in only five minutes. Just so lovely (as all your work is), it's truly a delight to read and the diction: "prospect of amorality" just so vividly chosen. Your words are just delicacies that I can't help but devour, always leaving me wanting more.

    7 months ago
  • Wisp

    Bookmarking for now! Will be back to give a thorough read and a proper comment after I finish class!

    7 months ago
  • sci-Fi

    B E A U T I F U L .

    7 months ago
  • mirkat

    wow! this is beautiful and deep and impactful! <3<3<3

    7 months ago
  • pyrrhic

    this would have taken me ages to write, and you did it in 5 minutes??? talent!!

    7 months ago
  • queenie

    dang it seems like a lot of poems i'm reading now are about/surrounding math class. great work.

    7 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    woah you wrote this in 5 minutes???? this would take my hours ahhhhhh
    so beautiful <333

    7 months ago