I've seen the way she feels,
Despite the lies of being a-ok,
She paints her face in laughs
But they are almost always fake
I see the depths of the mountains
That everyday she has to overtake
There is a small echo
It is the pain that she keeps hidden away
I know her
signs,
I know when she is hurting deep inside
I know when
It's not her greatest of days
I know
she doesn't want to live this way
She hides her heart so deep,
Its impossible to know what she thinks
She claims that she never cries
But I've always seen through the lies,
I know her
signs,
I know when she is hurting deep inside
I know when
It's not her greatest of days
I know
she doesn't want to live this way
She won't look me in the eye,
Although I've tried to do this countless times,
I can feel her pain,
I know she tries to hide it with her laughing ways,
But what if the laughs are screams of pain?
I see the depths of the mountains
That everyday she has to overtake
I know she tries to hide it with her crazy laughing ways,
What if the laughs are screams of pain?
I know her
signs,
I know when she is hurting deep inside
I know when
It's not her greatest of days
I know
she doesn't want to live this way
I know her
signs,
I know when
It's not her greatest of days
I know her
signs,
I know when she is hurting deep inside
I know
she doesn't want to live this way
How do you do this so perfectly! I can only write songs in the shower. Obviously, that doesn't work out... my paper gets wet(joking). Yeah, this is super good! You're so talented. Also... your bio says you play guitar so I got excited because I just got a guitar! Do you have tips for someone who can only play Seven Nation Army(slowly)?
11 Comments
alex.webber
This is actually so cool! I love the flow
Bluesno
Thanks for reviewing my piece! Really value your feedback :)
Just_A_Memory
This. Is. Freaking. Gorgeous!!!! <3 love ya ninja
JonesyL123
This is amazing! I love the beautiful detail you added. Keep writing!
Bluesno
I feel like this could be directed at me? It is so beautiful... you truly have a way with words <3
AJ - Izzy
Wow, this is amazing. My heart just stopped for a quick second there to admire the feeling, that's how great it is! :DD
Hrithik Sharma
Beautiful
Rose A. (semi hiatus)
How do you do this so perfectly! I can only write songs in the shower. Obviously, that doesn't work out... my paper gets wet(joking). Yeah, this is super good! You're so talented. Also... your bio says you play guitar so I got excited because I just got a guitar! Do you have tips for someone who can only play Seven Nation Army(slowly)?
Anna_19
Oh my god, this is amazing, way better than any song I've written, and i have two notebooks full. Keep writing!
Lata.B
I love this song! Wow yup ik this feeling way too well
Samina
I feel this