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Written By: ChocolateKiwi
November 11, 2020
FREE WRITING
9 Comments
beth r.
ahhhh this hits me in the fEeLs
Oaklandhattie
This poem is heartbreakingly gorgeous. The space you leave in between the lines is perfectly done so it sounds like something someone would actually say. Good job.
Riku-San
This sounds like it could be real
In Which Yaya Writes
This is really sweet! It’s simple yet a really nice read. Great job!
Rose A
Replying to your footnotes: I did enjoy this! And I'm glad you experimented outside of your comfort zone. I agree with katnissromanoff. It's simple, it's deep, it's stunning, all at the same time.
katnissromanoff
Oh my gosh, I seriously love this. It's so relatable and beautifully written. It's simple but really deep and stunning. Amazing!!!
Rachaelgrace (hiatus) :)
This is really good. I love the rythme and way that you wrote it. Nice job!
doodleninja
love the formatting of this! I can imagine the narrator stammering, slowly choosing their words, yet they're sincere and firm. Lovely work!
em wilder
awww, yay! it is brave of you to write this and well yeah.... this actually reminded me of a song called say something, i'm giving up on you by a great big world. it's kinda a sad song but like also hopeful. if you want more song recs check out a piece i did a while back just called songs. welllllllppp have a good rest of your day/afternoon/evening! <3