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"So please, oh please, we beg, we pray, Go throw your TV set away, And in its place you can install A lovely bookshelf on the wall. Then fill the shelves with lots of books." -Roald Dahl

Dark Rain

October 31, 2020


"Listen to me baby," he choked, "listen, you can't give up. No, stay with me baby. You can't do this to me. Listen, don't close your eyes. Just breathe, you're not going to die, cause you can't. Okay? Okay baby?" Her eyes looked glazed now, and she gasped instead of breathed. His hands held her face, but the blood was flowing again. "Darling," she gasped, "I. can't. stay. I. love. you. Please. Keep. fighting. Kiss me. One last.. time." He smiled, strangely, "Baby, you die, I die." and he closed the remaining inch of air between them, and kissed her once, gently. "Darling! Don't give up!" she whispered, and then her head dropped back and her eyes closed, the fighting fire gone. 
He stared at her, her long eyelashes wet against her cheeks, her dark hair spread on the pavement, rain falling on her still, and lovely face. He stood up, dazed, "Oh, God." he whispered, "What do I do?" Then he ran to the edge of the bridge on which she had died. He leaned over and shouted "How could they? How? Kill my girl? My girl? The world has turned against us. Us! No, longer us! Alethea! Only me. Alone." and he vomited, dark rain falling on his bent head, then looking over his shoulder he whispered, "I'm sorry Alethea."

He did not jump, he turned and strode proudly into the night, weapon at his side, and revenge and despair in his heart. 
Just some futuristic drama playing in my head..


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  • Rachaelgrace

    Oooo this feels like a scene that could be in a published novel! Great descriptions and emotion. :)

    11 months ago
  • Deleted User

    SO AWESOME!!! You described his emotions so well! Brilliant job :D

    11 months ago
  • happygiggles

    Replying- Yes, literally xD

    11 months ago
  • katnissromanoff

    Oh my gosh, I love this SO much!! It's so powerful and the emotions and descriptions are on point. Great job!!!!

    11 months ago
  • Lata.B

    Aww the love that they share is so beautiful. BUT OMG!!!

    11 months ago
  • Emi

    Wow, this is so powerful. I felt the man's emotion so much, and it made me sad. Please keep writing! I've already decided you are the master of death scenes; I could see this in a movie!

    11 months ago
  • happygiggles

    oh my giggly golly gosh, I love this. This is so emotional and the descriptions are just-well, words can't even begin to describe how simply amazing they are. The visuals they create-I am stunned. I love this so much!!!!!

    11 months ago
  • Anna_19

    You have to wirite more. It's really good. I want to know what happens.

    11 months ago
  • Huba Huba

    Woahhh this is interesting and really intense, any more?
    Also, I play piano too! :)

    11 months ago
  • queenie

    so intriguing i need m o a r

    11 months ago