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I love how short yet impactful this piece is.
Other than my slight confusion on that one sentence, this project is going to win an award! Beautiful, descriptive writing. I'm sure your artwork is just as good, if not better. One other suggestion: What jarred you awake and made you start to see the color? Was it that quarantine kept going on and on? Was it all of the police brutality and civil unrest? Our despicable president? Global warming? Make this more clear, it would add so much to this piece.
Well done! I love this so much and it really is a great story of personal reflection and realization and stuff like that. Good luck on the contest! <3 <3 <3