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Is there anything I can revise or improve? Please let me know, I really appreciate it!
The writing is impeccable and the descriptions are near perfection. The emotions flow of the potions in waves...a kind of riptide except you're the riptide.
I couldn't find any sort of theme or symbolism or message in here. I don't know if there is supposed to be or not, but from the stories I read, they all have fairly clear themes. Other than that...I could find
You are such an amazing writer and I loved reading this story. Maybe one day you'll be famous for your writing and people will read something you wrote in literature class sometime in the future....I don't doubt it one bit.